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Heavenletter #4671 The Seeming Others
Posted September 6th, 2013 by Luus
Dear Gloria,
I added another word "be" in the following paragraph and should you not agree, please change it.
Where could I be but in Heaven? And where can that estranged one you have considered yourself to be be but with Me in Heaven?
Love,
Luus


Beloved Eagle Eye,You sure
Beloved Eagle Eye,
You sure do catch that which needs attention, dear Luus! You have definitely pointed to something. Thank you so much.
Technically, what you did is accurate, and you make me think. This is a tough one:
Here it is as it was:
And where can that estranged one you have considered yourself to be but with Me in Heaven?
The change you made:
And where can that estranged one you have considered yourself to be be but with Me in Heaven.
What you have is accurate yet it is awkward also. I don't know that I can find anything betterI but I'm going to try, dear Luus. Let's see:
And where can that estranged one that you considered yourself to be -- where else can you be but with Me in Heaven?
That is the best I can think of right now, dear one. I hope it's a little easier to follow.
Please continue to point out what doesn't seem right to you, for you are superb at discovering what needs attention. Please continue!
Luus, we have to be careful about setting a precedent for making changes except for clearly obvious typos where the fix is also smooth and obvious -- misspellings, wrong word, words repeated carelessly like and and, and double spacing when one space is meant.... In the rare time, when the solution is debatable, let's wait, dear one. This message is meant also for others down the road who may gain access.
God bless you. With love, Gloria