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Heavenletters #3592

Posted September 20th, 2010 by pinksandgirl

Heavenletter #3592 is proofed.

The Weather of Life

5th paragraph, 1st line.

Should there be the word, "to" after "alike"? "Innocence is alike to a natural ice skater "

"We come back again to innocence. Innocence is alike a natural ice skater who glides and has so much fun. Sophistication, on the other hand, has moves in mind and performs them elegantly, perhaps a little stylized."

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Hi, Pinksgirl! I'm quite

On September 20th, 2010 Gloria Wen... says:

Hi, Pinksgirl!

I'm quite sure it is the alike that is the error. It should be: "Innocence is like a natural ice skater..." I'll fix it. Thank you so much.