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Heavenletter #5284 The Flip-Flopping of Love

Posted April 10th, 2015 by Anneke

The Flip-Flopping of Love
Heavenletter #5284 Published on: May 14, 2015

What a pile-up of negativity brings war forth and domestic battles and roughness as well.

Dear Gloria,

Should this sentence read: What a pile-up of negativity brings forth is war
and domestic battles and roughness as well.
 ?

Thanks a lot,

love,
Anneke

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Dear Anneke, you catch

On April 10th, 2015 Gloria Wen... says:

Dear Anneke, you catch something -- well, I'll show you in a moment.

You are correct that the sentence as it is isn't at its best.

What a pile-up of negativity brings war forth and domestic battles and roughness as well.

Without getting into the grammar, here's what I would do with the sentence to make the sentence smoother:

What a pile-up of negativity brings forth wars and domestic battles and roughness as well
:

Please note I also capitalized war.

ANNEKE, I MEANT TO SAY MAKE WAR PLURL!

Will you kindly fix this in the Heavenletter? Kindly let me know.

Thanks a lot for your conscientiousness, Anneke.

I will make the changes in the heavenletter

On April 10th, 2015 Anneke says:

Dear Gloria,

I understand that sentence better now!! Thanks!

I will make the changes in the heavenletter...

from heart to heart, namasté, Anneke

I did wonder....

On April 10th, 2015 Anneke says:

I did wonder....and changed it back again .....

from heart to heart, namasté, Anneke

Thanks a bunch, dear Anneke.

On April 10th, 2015 Gloria Wen... says:

Thanks a bunch, dear Anneke. Pure typo. Glad we caught it!