Heavenletter #5258 Like a Thousand Stars word missing?
Dear Gloria,
there might be a word missing in this sentence Another is not always aware himself of what he intends ?
And as well in this sentence:There is a deeper Reality that for you to hold hands with.
Thanks a lot!
Blessings,
Anneke
Like a Thousand Stars
Heavenletter #5258 Published on: April 18, 2015
There is intention. You do not always see what another intends. Another is not always aware himself of what he intends.
I will tell you that it is better for you not to be wary. What is being wary but looking for a demonstration of ill-will? Put away your microscope. See from a greater distance. From a greater distance, you may see more clearly. In any case, you see through the telescope of your vision. There is a deeper Reality that for you to hold hands with.
First of all, Anneke. You
First of all, Anneke. You are a wonder! Thank you so much for pointing out what needs attention.
Another is not always aware himself of what he intends.
I think the above isn't missing a word, yet it is awkward.
Let's try changing the order of some words:
Another is not always himself aware of what he intends.
Or
One is not always himself aware of what he intends. :
(We might need to see the whole paragraph to be sure whether One fits.)
Does switching the order of aware and himself make it sound better, dear Anneke?
In the following sentence, I think we may have an extra word! Let's see:
There is a deeper Reality that for you to hold hands with.
Does it feel better to say:
There is a deeper Reality for you to hold hands with.
What do you feel?
And it is for me to thank you, dear translator.
Yes, this makes more sense!
Yes, dear Gloria, both sentences make more sense now.
I will make the changes.
from heart to heart, namasté, Anneke
Bless you!
Bless you!