Dearest Gloria-Heavenletters #3583-3587
Heavenletters #3583-3587 are proofed.
Heavenletter #3583 The Royal King
4th paragraph, 9th line.
Should the word, "any" be "an"...to read, "I want today to have an easy passage through my life."
"A day is dawning that has never dawned before. This is the day that has been waiting for you. This is the day for your debut. Walk out on the stage of the world, and say: “Good morning, Day. We have been waiting for each other to appear on the horizon. Now we are here, and we say hello. Good day, Sun, I also, say because of my desire to welcome all light to me and to the world. I want to be the light of the world too. I want to be a discoverer of light as well. I want to be light inside, outside, every which side. How I love to be light and light up days and eyes and all of life. I want today to have any easy passage through my life. I want today to be energized by my receipt of it. I want, I want…”
Heavenletter #3585 A Great Being of Light in a Vast Universe
5th paragraph, 2nd line
Should there be the word "the" in the sentence..."You are greater than the surface, and yet...."
"And you are a miracle. From the waters of the deep, you came to the surface. You are greater than surface, and yet the surface is a great place to be. You have come up for air, beloveds. You are like a periscope who has come to the surface in order to look around. Here is the world I have created for you. Here are you I have created for the world. Truly, you are perfect for each other, the world to walk in, and you to walk in the world. You and the world are like two steps of progress. In terms of the relative world, you can’t have one without the other."
Heavenletter #3586 You Do Not Exist
8th paragraph, 6th line
There is an extra period. "...trappings."
"You don’t have to wait until you die for the lease on your personality to be up. You can get right down to your True Self at any moment. You can shed the accumulation of a lifetime. You can take off the decorations. All that you thought enhanced your career of life was a cover-up. And now you can bare yourself to yourself and say Adieu to all the trappings.. You can say, “Hello, Who I really am. Hi, there.” But who can say that when your personality has packed its bags?"
Heavenletter #3583 The Royal
Heavenletter #3583 The Royal King
4th paragraph, 9th line.
Should the word, "any" be "an"...to read, "I want today to have an easy passage through my life." Yes, absolutely.
"A day is dawning that has never dawned before. This is the day that has been waiting for you. This is the day for your debut. Walk out on the stage of the world, and say: “Good morning, Day. We have been waiting for each other to appear on the horizon. Now we are here, and we say hello. Good day, Sun, I also, say because of my desire to welcome all light to me and to the world. I want to be the light of the world too. I want to be a discoverer of light as well. I want to be light inside, outside, every which side. How I love to be light and light up days and eyes and all of life. I want today to have any easy passage through my life. I want today to be energized by my receipt of it. I want, I want…”
Heavenletter #3585 A Great Being of Light in a Vast Universe
5th paragraph, 2nd line
Should there be the word "the" in the sentence..."You are greater than the surface, and yet...." It could be, but it's okay without.
"And you are a miracle. From the waters of the deep, you came to the surface. You are greater than surface, and yet the surface is a great place to be. You have come up for air, beloveds. You are like a periscope who has come to the surface in order to look around. Here is the world I have created for you. Here are you I have created for the world. Truly, you are perfect for each other, the world to walk in, and you to walk in the world. You and the world are like two steps of progress. In terms of the relative world, you can’t have one without the other."
Heavenletter #3586 You Do Not Exist
8th paragraph, 6th line
There is an extra period. "...trappings." Beloved Nancy, something like this just can be done. No need to ask me. Oh, but you don't have access to change? Oh, dear, am I supposed to be making these changes? We'll have to figure something out. You are sure a great proofer, Nancy. Thank you.
"You don’t have to wait until you die for the lease on your personality to be up. You can get right down to your True Self at any moment. You can shed the accumulation of a lifetime. You can take off the decorations. All that you thought enhanced your career of life was a cover-up. And now you can bare yourself to yourself and say Adieu to all the trappings.. You can say, “Hello, Who I really am. Hi, there.” But who can say that when your personality has packed its bags?"
Dear Nancy, if I have to
Dear Nancy, if I have to make these changes, then it will make it easier for me if you send me one at a time and not save them up to send in a batch. I probably suggested that you do them in batches -- can I take it back! And if I'm the one who has to make the changes, I'll just go ahead and do them without my explanations -- unless you need them as a guide. Let me know.
Proofing
Dearest Gloria,
I do not require any explanation on my proofing findings. I leave all final editing to you of course. Would you prefer a private email or should I continue to post here. I proof them as they come in from Theophil. I thought that if I post them in batches you would feel better since that would provide you with some breathing time between proofings. God Bless your work and all you do for humanity.
Blessings,
Nancy
Thank you, dear Nancy. It is
Thank you, dear Nancy. It is the back and forth from your suggestions to the actual Heavenletter. I have to leave one place on the stie for another and back again, and it makes me dizzy.
How far ahead is Theophil? Is it possible to proof just one Heavenletter a day? If you don't spot a typo, then don't send anything. I KNOW that you are proofing most carefully. Will that work for you? Let's see how this works, kid.
Thanks a bunch.
I will...
I will only post if there is a problem with the Heavenletter. Theophil varies in the number of Heavenletters...when I see a grouping I like to proof them all so it is done and not hanging over my head because it is very easy to fall behind. However, know that they will be proofed and that you will be alerted only when there is a question or concern. I will post one at a time.
Blessings,
Nancy
Bless you!
Bless you! By all means, proof all at once as you like. It makes sense. If possible, just send me one at a time. Many thanks. You are the best proofreader on the planet!