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#1915 Earth in orbit
Posted February 19th, 2006 by ManWithout...
Hello Friends,
God said replace fear
With a thought of My Presence
My Presence is true
God said where you are
Let joy of doing loom large
Truly you can live
God said Beloveds
Let joy of Being loom large
Life has to be more
God said do not fear
Imagine the love instead
The reality
God said look both ways
Common sense gets you across
But not common fear
Love, Light and Aloha,
Karen
#1932 Earth in orbit
Thank you Karen,
Your Haiku is Always refreshing and enlightening. I still find myself counting the syllables, some lines somehow sound longer. However, you are never wrong, every line has the perfect amount. I do notice that I am feeling a rhythm, soon will be writing them again without struggle. Still smiling wwith "the reality," feels like there should be more, but no, it fits perfectly!
LPL,
Joe
At 10:13 AM 2/19/2006, you wrote:
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#1932 Earth in orbit
Dear Joe,
I love how you read everything on this forum with your Braille eyes and respond as well so perceptively and positively.
By the way, I used to teach Haiku when I taught English in public school. That I taught it doesn’t mean I was expert in it, but it did mean I loved it, and I did do some reading up on it. As I recall, 5 7 5 syllables was a guide, and every Haiku doesn’t have to follow that exactly.
Blessings and love,
Gloria
From: Joe Tolve [mailto:heavenletters_haikus [at] heavenletters [dot] org]
Sent: Sunday, February 19, 2006 6:10 PM
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Subject: [HeavenLetters Board HeavenLetters Haikus] Re: #1932 Earth in orbit
Thank you Karen,
Your Haiku is Always refreshing and enlightening. I still find myself counting the syllables, some lines somehow sound longer. However, you are never wrong, every line has the perfect amount. I do notice that I am feeling a rhythm, soon will be writing them again without struggle. Still smiling wwith "the reality," feels like there should be more, but no, it fits perfectly!
LPL,
Joe
At 10:13 AM 2/19/2006, you wrote:
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Hello Friends,
God said replace fear
With a thought of My Presence
My Presence is true
God said where you are
Let joy of doing loom large
Truly you can live
God said Beloveds
Let joy of Being loom large
Life has to be more
God said do not fear
Imagine the love instead
The reality
God said look both ways
Common sense gets you across
But not common fear
Love, Light and Aloha,
Karen
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#1932 Earth in orbit
Gloria,
Haiku was never put into braille, as far as a book goes. I had heard it a few times but always thought that there were punctuation marks, but examining Karen's Haiku with mysynthesizer and Window-Eyes screen reader I found out almost the first day that she wasn't using even a period, is that commonly done?
LPL,
Joe
At 10:33 AM 2/20/2006, you wrote:
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