Dear Gloria,
in http://www.heavenletters.org/the-terrain-of-yourself.html
parag. 1
"To what do you make yourself accountable? To the world? To yourself? To Me?" Is the "what" equivalent to "whom" here?
parag. 5
"You are a commuter, beloved. You scale the heights. You hit the lows. You speak to life, and you are a maker of life."
The general definition of a commuter is 1. One that travels regularly from one place to another, as from suburb to city and back.
2. An airplane or airline that carries passengers relatively short distances and often serves remote communities and small airports.
I have a hard time to render this idea of commuter especially with the idea that "you scale the heights. You hit the lows… What is the connection?
parag. 11
"You win. Life gets down on its knees for you and yells, “Uncle.” Can you give us alternative interjections?
Thanks