First paragraph, ... the bed that is "just right."
I would think that it should be "... the bed that is "just right".
Last word at the end of the 6th paragraph: You.
I would prefer to make this: You!
8th paragraph: What is to prevent it but some thought of yours.
Should there not be a question mark after yours?
13th paragraph: ....Have you perhaps said; "Just another day,"...
Should this not be: "Just another day", ... ?