Dear Gloria,
There seems to be the word "are" missing in the very first sentence:
No matter how far along in life you may think you, you are a beginner. You are a beginner in that you are always growing. There is no end to you, beloveds. You are always beginning. You cannot take a breath and relax thinking that you have become all you are to become. You can take a breath and relax knowing that you will continue to learn and grow and continue to express all that is within you to express.
Should it read: "No matter how far along in life you may think you are, you are a beginner."?
It seems to me that in the following sentence the plural form should be singular, since "everything" is the subject here:
In fact, everything but Being, Soul, and Love are so temporary that they are illusion. Being, Soul, Love are True and Real.
And now I see that there is a space too many.